Tuesday, December 3, 2013

Writing improvement

The most recent piece of writing I did was the Mcmurphy characterization. There was a lot to write about on this paper and it only had to be a page long so it was relativley easy to write but I feel like there were a few things I could have done to improve it. I probably should have taken some text from the book and used it I feel like that really would have made it better. I didn't really take much time to organize it i just kind of threw my thoughts on to the paper and it turned out alright. I do feel like I did do a good job though with fully explaining my thoughts and such I did go pretty in depth on the prompt. So in all it turned out fine but it could have been better if I had organized my thoughts and added some text to the book but other than those things it was fine.